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Keisok

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Honestly, I get the heebie-jeebies when I look at this piece.Did she suffer from a woodchipper accident? I'm asking because those legs are horribly atrophied and malformed, almost as if she was either born that way or suffered some terrible accident. I also raise umbrage with the chin and the mouth, especially the latter since while the former is technically a stylistic choice, the latter is too far down the face to be so. Her tail also seems a bit off to me.

SenpaiLove responds:

Thank you for your response I have not done an angle like this before on any of my characters before so this was a first time perspective. I'll admit that I need more time on learning anatomy but when I get more paper haha. This helps

A quickie...

I'm tired at this point, so I'll make it quick. Stiff body, stock backdrop, halfassed shading for the fore and midground... I'll just end here.

Where to begin...

First off it looks like she's lacking elbows with that left arm's deformity. Second, the shoulders seem to be popped out of alignment, because I don't think that limbs can go to that height. Either that or the upper torso and lower torso aren't connected properly. The upper part's backwards in comparison to the lower part.

I should point out that the tits are lopsided. They're about 22.5 degrees off from where they would be... wow. I just noticed the spine's lopsided. Wow. That's some serious scoliosis. Also, since when did tails become dorsal fins? Because that's on the small of here back. I like how you're having the hips cocked to one side when she's sitting.

Seriously, the right leg's okay if the floor was lopsided. But the left leg... ouch. It looks like the femur was broken. Or is that an ass cheek? I just noticed both lower legs jutting away from the knee. Finally, it looks like she had bound feet with those puny appendages.

Wow... I got back to the head to mention the hair not being connected. The head's stuck on without a neck apparently.

That's all I see at the moment. There might be more, but that's all I got.

I think I'm going Japanesa.

You still have issues in having the head and tail being attached to the body. They're just not feeling natural (As natural as this picture can get). I also want to point out that the lega seem like they're missing the knees with that 180 degree lock on the joint, and the feet doesn't look like it's resting on the floor.

That's all I have for this picture.

I don't think this is legal...

I only say this because this is pretty much cp. Also that is a huge ass. Like, that it's breaking a hip from the looks of it. Also the front's kind of going lopsided. It's of to the left. Also the tails are glued on and the arms are not present.

I could go on, but I think Chris Hansen wants me to take a seat.

Not that much to say about me to be honest.

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